Re: [PATCH] Drivers: isdn: gigaset: checkpatch cleanup

[Bas Peters]

Dear Tilman,

Thanks for the feedback. I made a lot of mistakes... Sorry for wasting your
time with this patch. I'll work on improving it and dividing it up
into smaller chunks
as recommended  by other kernel developers and will try to fix the issues.

With kind regards,

Bas

2015-01-03 16:01 GMT+01:00 Tilman Schmidt <tilman@xxxxxxx>:
> [I only just noticed that my first reply got terribly mangled by my
> mailer, so here it is again, hopefully more readable this time.]
>
> Hello Bas,
>
> I have several objections to your patch.
>
> Am 31.12.2014 um 18:34 schrieb Bas Peters:
>> I have not been able to test the code as I do not have access to the
>> hardware but since no new features were really added I don't think that
>> should pose a problem.
>
> It's always problematic to change code you cannot test.
> At the very least, if you do coding style cleanups you should test
> whether the result still compiles and generates the same code as before.
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/bas-gigaset.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/bas-gigaset.c
>> @@ -261,11 +261,12 @@ static inline void dump_urb(enum debuglevel level, const char *tag,
>>  {
>>  #ifdef CONFIG_GIGASET_DEBUG
>>       int i;
>> +
>>       gig_dbg(level, "%s urb(0x%08lx)->{", tag, (unsigned long) urb);
>>       if (urb) {
>>               gig_dbg(level,
>> -                     "  dev=0x%08lx, pipe=%s:EP%d/DV%d:%s, "
>> -                     "hcpriv=0x%08lx, transfer_flags=0x%x,",
>> +                     "  dev=0x%08lx, pipe=%s:EP%d/DV%d:%s,
>> +                     hcpriv=0x%08lx, transfer_flags=0x%x,",
>
> This is syntactically wrong and won't compile. You cannot have an
> unescaped newline inside a string literal. (Applies to two later
> chunks, too.)
>
>> @@ -566,8 +566,8 @@ static int atread_submit(struct cardstate *cs, int timeout)
>>
>>       if (basstate & BS_SUSPEND) {
>>               dev_notice(cs->dev,
>> -                        "HD_READ_ATMESSAGE not submitted, "
>> -                        "suspend in progress\n");
>> +                        "HD_READ_ATMESSAGE not submitted,\
>> +                        suspend in progress\n");
>
> This makes the message less readable by inserting lots of whitespace
> after the comma. (Applies to five later chunks, too.)
>
>> @@ -2312,13 +2312,13 @@ static int gigaset_probe(struct usb_interface *interface,
>>       /* Reject application specific interfaces
>>        */
>>       if (hostif->desc.bInterfaceClass != 255) {
>> -             dev_warn(&udev->dev, "%s: bInterfaceClass == %d\n",
>> +             dev_warn(&udev->dev, "%s: bInterfaceClass == %d\n",\
>>                        __func__, hostif->desc.bInterfaceClass);
>>               return -ENODEV;
>>       }
>>
>>       dev_info(&udev->dev,
>> -              "%s: Device matched (Vendor: 0x%x, Product: 0x%x)\n",
>> +              "%s: Device matched (Vendor: 0x%x, Product: 0x%x)\n",\
>>                __func__, le16_to_cpu(udev->descriptor.idVendor),
>>                le16_to_cpu(udev->descriptor.idProduct));
>
> This looks strange, and not like correct coding style. Why would you
> want to escape the end of line after a function argument?
>
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/capi.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/capi.c
>
>> @@ -1370,7 +1373,7 @@ static void do_connect_req(struct gigaset_capi_ctr *iif,
>>       cmsg->adr.adrPLCI |= (bcs->channel + 1) << 8;
>>
>>       /* build command table */
>> -     commands = kzalloc(AT_NUM * (sizeof *commands), GFP_KERNEL);
>> +     commands = kzalloc(AT_NUM * (sizeof(*commands)), GFP_KERNEL);
>
> Extra pair of parentheses around sizeof(*commands) is unnecessary.
> (Applies to one later chunk, too.)
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/common.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/common.c
>> @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ void gigaset_dbg_buffer(enum debuglevel level, const unsigned char *msg,
>>  {
>>       unsigned char outbuf[80];
>>       unsigned char c;
>> -     size_t space = sizeof outbuf - 1;
>> +     size_t space = sizeof(outbuf - 1);
>
> This is wrong. The sizeof operator must be applied to the array
> variable outbuf, not to the expression (outbuf - 1).
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/ev-layer.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/ev-layer.c
>
>> @@ -1083,7 +1079,7 @@ static void do_action(int action, struct cardstate *cs,
>>
>>       int channel;
>>
>> -     unsigned char *s, *e;
>> +     unsigned char *s;
>>       int i;
>>       unsigned long val;
>>
>> @@ -1355,8 +1351,20 @@ static void do_action(int action, struct cardstate *cs,
>>               }
>>
>>               for (i = 0; i < 4; ++i) {
>> -                     val = simple_strtoul(s, (char **) &e, 10);
>> -                     if (val > INT_MAX || e == s)
>> +                     unsigned long *e;
>> +
>> +                     val = kstrtoul(s, 10, e);
>> +                     if (val == -EINVAL) {
>> +                             dev_err(cs->dev, "Parsing error on converting string to\
>> +                                              unsigned long\n");
>> +                             break;
>> +                     }
>> +                     if (val == -ERANGE) {
>> +                             dev_err(cs->dev, "Overflow error converting string to\
>> +                                              unsigned long\n");
>> +                             break;
>> +                     }
>> +                     if (val > INT_MAX || *e == s)
>>                               break;
>>                       if (i == 3) {
>>                               if (*e)
>> @@ -1364,7 +1372,7 @@ static void do_action(int action, struct cardstate *cs,
>>                       } else if (*e != '.')
>>                               break;
>>                       else
>> -                             s = e + 1;
>> +                             s = *e + 1;
>>                       cs->fwver[i] = val;
>>               }
>>               if (i != 4) {
>
> This cannot work. The pointer variable e gets dereferenced without
> ever being initialized. The type mismatches when declaring e as
> pointing to an unsigned long but comparing *e to s in one place and to
> a character literal in another point make me wonder which semantics
> you had in mind for e in the first place.
> Also your error messages are not helpful for someone reading the log
> and trying to find out what went wrong, and not very readable because
> of the big stretch of whitespace you insert between the words "to" and
> "unsigned". In fact I'm not even convinced it's a good idea to emit a
> log message at all here.
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/gigaset.h
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/gigaset.h
>> @@ -94,8 +94,7 @@ enum debuglevel {
>>  #define gig_dbg(level, format, arg...)                                       \
>>       do {                                                            \
>>               if (unlikely(((enum debuglevel)gigaset_debuglevel) & (level))) \
>> -                     printk(KERN_DEBUG KBUILD_MODNAME ": " format "\n", \
>> -                            ## arg);                                 \
>> +                     dev_dbg(cs->dev, KBUILD_MODNAME ": " format "\n")\
>>       } while (0)
>
> This will not work when
> - there is no cs variable in the context where the macro is used or
> - cs->dev doesn't contain a valid device pointer or
> - the format string references additional arguments,
> all of which actually occur in the driver.
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/i4l.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/i4l.c
>
>> @@ -624,14 +624,14 @@ int gigaset_isdn_regdev(struct cardstate *cs, const char *isdnid)
>>  {
>>       isdn_if *iif;
>>
>> -     iif = kmalloc(sizeof *iif, GFP_KERNEL);
>> +     iif = kmalloc(sizeof(*iif, GFP_KERNEL));
>
> You're calling kmalloc with too few arguments here.
>
>>       if (!iif) {
>>               pr_err("out of memory\n");
>>               return -ENOMEM;
>>       }
>>
>> -     if (snprintf(iif->id, sizeof iif->id, "%s_%u", isdnid, cs->minor_index)
>> -         >= sizeof iif->id) {
>> +     if (snprintf(iif->id, sizeof(iif->id, "%s_%u", isdnid, cs->minor_index))
>> +         >= sizeof(iif->id)) {
>
> You're calling snprintf with too few arguments here.
>
>> --- a/drivers/isdn/gigaset/proc.c
>> +++ b/drivers/isdn/gigaset/proc.c
>> @@ -27,13 +27,18 @@ static ssize_t set_cidmode(struct device *dev, struct device_attribute *attr,
>>                          const char *buf, size_t count)
>>  {
>>       struct cardstate *cs = dev_get_drvdata(dev);
>> -     long int value;
>> -     char *end;
>> +     long int *value;
>> +     int result;
>>
>> -     value = simple_strtol(buf, &end, 0);
>> -     while (*end)
>> -             if (!isspace(*end++))
>> -                     return -EINVAL;
>> +     result = kstrtol(buf, 0, &value);
>> +     if (result == -ERANGE)
>> +             /* Overflow error */
>> +             dev_err(cs->dev, "Overflow error on conversion from string to\
>> +                              long\n");
>> +     if (result == -EINVAL)
>> +             /* Parsing error  */
>> +             dev_err(cs->dev, "Parsing error on conversion from string to\
>> +                              long\n");
>>       if (value < 0 || value > 1)
>>               return -EINVAL;
>>
>
> This changes semantics. Your code will not accept the same input as
> the original code, and it will emit messages of its own instead of
> just returning an error code to the caller as it should.
>
> In sum: NACK.
>
> Regards,
> Tilman
>
> --
> Tilman Schmidt                              E-Mail: tilman@xxxxxxx
> Bonn, Germany
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