Re: [PATCH v2 1/2] nvme: add tracepoint for nvme_setup_cmd

From: Christoph Hellwig
Date: Tue Jan 16 2018 - 11:50:00 EST


> + trace_seq_printf(p, "slba=%llu, length=%u, control=0x%x, dsmgmt=%u, reftag=%u",

Overly long line.

> + (unsigned long long)le64_to_cpu(rw.slba),

u64 now always is an unsigned long long, no need for the cast.

> + le16_to_cpu(rw.length), le16_to_cpu(rw.control),
> + le32_to_cpu(rw.dsmgmt), le32_to_cpu(rw.reftag));
> + trace_seq_putc(p, 0);

This look weird, is there a a good reason for putting a 0 character?

Also I'd be tempted to add a new trace.c file for these and make them
dependent on whatever kernel option enables the tracing.

> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/drivers/nvme/host/trace.h
> @@ -0,0 +1,69 @@
> +/* SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0 */

Please add a real copyright header including the author.

const char *nvme_trace_parse_cmd(struct trace_seq *p, struct nvme_command cmnd);

> +#define __parse_nvme_cmd(cmd) nvme_trace_parse_cmd(p, cmd)

This looks weird.

> +TRACE_EVENT(nvme_setup_cmd,
> +
> + TP_PROTO(struct nvme_command *cmd),
> +
> + TP_ARGS(cmd),
> +

Please remove these empty lines.

> + TP_STRUCT__entry(
> + __field( __u8, opcode )
> + __field( __u8, flags )
> + __field( __u16, cid )
> + __field( __le32, nsid )
> + __field( __le64, metadata )

> + __field_struct( struct nvme_command, cmnd )
And the additional whitespaces before and after the braces

> + TP_fast_assign(
> + __entry->opcode = cmd->common.opcode;
> + __entry->flags = cmd->common.flags;
> + __entry->cid = cmd->common.command_id;
> + __entry->nsid = cmd->common.nsid;
> + __entry->metadata = cmd->common.metadata;
> + memcpy(&__entry->cmnd, cmd, sizeof(__entry->cmnd));

Copying the whole SQE in tracing seems rather excessive.

> + TP_printk("nsid=%u, command_id=%u, flags=0x%x, metadata=0x%llx, cmd=(%s %s)",

Too long line.

> + le32_to_cpu(__entry->nsid), __entry->cid, __entry->flags,
> + (unsigned long long) le64_to_cpu(__entry->metadata),

no need for the cast.

> +#undef TRACE_INCLUDE_PATH
> +#define TRACE_INCLUDE_PATH ../../drivers/nvme/host

This seems wrong. Instead you should make sure we include the srcdir
in the makefile, take a look at fs/xfs/Makefile for example.