Re: [PATCH v2 3/4] Documentation/scheduler/sched-deadline.txt: improve and clarify AC bits
From: Ingo Molnar
Date: Fri Aug 22 2014 - 04:31:24 EST
* Luca Abeni <luca.abeni@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Hi Ingo,
>
> On Thu, 21 Aug 2014 15:38:37 +0200
> Ingo Molnar <mingo@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> [...]
> > > + If the total utilisation sum_i(WCET_i/P_i) (sum of the
> > > utilisations
> > > + WCET_i/P_i of all the tasks in the system - notice that when
> > > considering
> > > + multiple tasks, the parameters of the i-th one are indicated with
> > > the "_i"
> > > + suffix) is larger than M (with M equal to the number of CPUs),
> > > then the
> > > + system will surely not be able to respect all of the deadlines,
> > > and no
> > > + execution time is guaranteed for non real-time tasks, which risk
> > > to be
> > > + starved by real-time tasks.
> >
> > The last part doesn't really parse as correct English for me -
> > maybe also split this overly long sentence into two or three
> > sentences, to make it easier to understand?
> Sorry about this; after re-reading the sentence, I agree it looks
> confusing. What about:
Looks good to me, with a few details:
> "
> If the total utilisation sum_i(WCET_i/P_i) is larger than M (with M
> equal to the number of CPUs), then the scheduler can not be able to
> respect all of the deadlines.
s/can not be able to respect/is unable to respect
> Note that the total utilisation is defined as the sum of the
> utilisations WCET_i/P_i of all the real-time tasks in the system (when
> considering multiple real-time tasks, the parameters of the i-th one are
> indicated with the "_i" suffix).
The parentheses are a bit confusing here - they come after a
half finished sentence - which at the end turns out to have
ended.
How about something like:
> Note that total utilisation is defined as the sum of the
> utilisations WCET_i/P_i over all the real-time tasks in the
> system. When considering multiple real-time tasks, the
> parameters of the i-th task are indicated with the "_i"
> suffix.
?
> Moreover, if the total utilisation is larger than M, then non real-time
> tasks risk to be starved by real-time tasks.
How about:
> Moreover, if the total utilisation is larger than M, then we
> risk starving non- real-time tasks by real-time tasks.
?
Thanks,
Ingo
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