Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

From: Ingo Molnar
Date: Wed Nov 08 2017 - 04:34:49 EST



* Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> wrote:

> I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> have got much better english by others than me.
>
> But,
>
> I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> starting with a better one.
>
> In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
>
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> From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx>
> Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
> Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
>
> The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> to enhance its readability.
>
> Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx>
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> Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------

Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and
various grammar mistakes...

Thanks,

Ingo