Re: [PATCH v5 07/11] intel_sgx: ptrace() support

[Thomas Gleixner]

On Mon, 13 Nov 2017, Jarkko Sakkinen wrote:

> Implemented VMA callbacks in order to ptrace() debug enclaves.

The amount of information in this changelog is really overwhelming.

Please explain WHY you need that and HOW its supposed to work.

> +static inline int sgx_vma_access_word(struct sgx_encl *encl,
> +				      unsigned long addr,
> +				      void *buf,
> +				      int len,
> +				      int write,
> +				      struct sgx_encl_page *encl_page,
> +				      int i)

Can you find a way to waste more lines for a function declaration?

Aside of that using 'i' as a argument is just broken. Arguments should be
self explaining as far as possible and sure not using names which are
commonly used in code for iterators etc.

> +{
> +	char data[sizeof(unsigned long)];
> +	int align, cnt, offset;
> +	void *vaddr;
> +	int ret;
> +
> +	offset = ((addr + i) & (PAGE_SIZE - 1)) & ~(sizeof(unsigned long) - 1);
> +	align = (addr + i) & (sizeof(unsigned long) - 1);

The kernel has macros for this kind of operations.

> +	cnt = sizeof(unsigned long) - align;
> +	cnt = min(cnt, len - i);
> +
> +	if (write) {
> +		if (encl_page->flags & SGX_ENCL_PAGE_TCS &&
> +		    (offset < 8 || (offset + (len - i)) > 16))

Hard coded numbers which are nowhere explained are a nono. Please use proper
defines and explain the meaning so the code becomes understandable.

> +			return -ECANCELED;
> +
> +		if (align || (cnt != sizeof(unsigned long))) {

What the heck is this doing? The complete lack of any comment in this
code makes review impossible.

> +			vaddr = sgx_get_page(encl_page->epc_page);
> +			ret = __edbgrd((void *)((unsigned long)vaddr + offset),
> +				       (unsigned long *)data);

This typecast mess all over the place is just wrong. You either use the
wrong variable types or your functions have the wrong parameter type.

Thanks,

	tglx