Re: [PATCH v29 03/16] leds: multicolor: Introduce a multicolor class definition

[Pavel Machek]

Hi!

> Introduce a multicolor class that groups colored LEDs
> within a LED node.

> +What:		/sys/class/leds/<led>/multi_intensity
> +Date:		March 2020
> +KernelVersion:	5.8
> +Contact:	Dan Murphy <dmurphy@xxxxxx>
> +Description:	read/write
> +		Intensity level for the LED color within an array of integers.

? "This file contains array of integers".

> +		The intensities for each color must be entered based on the
> +		multi_index array.

This does not make sense to me. "Order of components is described by
the multi_index array"?

> The max_intensity should not exceed

"max_intensity" -> "maximum intensity"?

> +		/sys/class/leds/<led>/max_brightness.

> +Multicolor Class Brightness Control
> +===================================
> +The multicolor class framework will calculate each monochrome LEDs intensity.

?

> +static ssize_t multi_intensity_store(struct device *dev,
> +				struct device_attribute *intensity_attr,
> +				const char *buf, size_t size)
> +{
> +	struct led_classdev *led_cdev = dev_get_drvdata(dev);
> +	struct led_classdev_mc *mcled_cdev = lcdev_to_mccdev(led_cdev);
> +	int nrchars, offset = 0;
> +	int intensity_value[LED_COLOR_ID_MAX];
> +	int i;
> +	ssize_t ret;
> +
> +	mutex_lock(&led_cdev->led_access);
> +
> +	for (i = 0; i < mcled_cdev->num_colors; i++) {
> +		ret = sscanf(buf + offset, "%i%n",
> +			     &intensity_value[i], &nrchars);
> +		if (ret != 1) {
> +			dev_dbg(led_cdev->dev,
> +				"Incorrect number of LEDs expected %i values intensity was not applied\n",
> +				mcled_cdev->num_colors);
> +			ret = -EINVAL;
> +			goto err_out;
> +		}
> +		offset += nrchars;
> +	}
> +
> +	/* account for the space at the end of the buffer */
> +	offset++;

space? I'd expect \n there. And it would be good to verify it is
indeed \n, so that for example "0 0 0b" is not accepted.

Please remove the dev_dbg()s that can be triggered by userspace. We
don't want users spamming the logs.

> +static ssize_t multi_intensity_show(struct device *dev,
> +			      struct device_attribute *intensity_attr,
> +			      char *buf)
> +{
> +	struct led_classdev *led_cdev = dev_get_drvdata(dev);
> +	struct led_classdev_mc *mcled_cdev = lcdev_to_mccdev(led_cdev);
> +	int len = 0;
> +	int i;
> +
> +	for (i = 0; i < mcled_cdev->num_colors; i++) {
> +		len += sprintf(buf + len, "%d",
> +			       mcled_cdev->subled_info[i].intensity);
> +		len += sprintf(buf + len, " ");

We should not really put " " before newline.

> +static ssize_t multi_index_show(struct device *dev,
> +			      struct device_attribute *multi_index_attr,
> +			      char *buf)
> +{
> +	for (i = 0; i < mcled_cdev->num_colors; i++) {
> +		index = mcled_cdev->subled_info[i].color_index;
> +		len += sprintf(buf + len, "%s", led_colors[index]);
> +		len += sprintf(buf + len, " ");
> +	}

We should not really put " " before newline.

> +{
> +	struct led_classdev *led_cdev;
> +
> +	if (!mcled_cdev)
> +		return -EINVAL;
> +
> +	if (!mcled_cdev->num_colors)
> +		return -EINVAL;

It is plain int, so you may want to check for <= 0? Or maybe make it
unsigned?

> +MODULE_LICENSE("GPL v2");

If your legal department allows that, GPL v2+ would be preffered
(globally).

> +struct mc_subled {
> +	int color_index;
> +	int brightness;
> +	int intensity;
> +	int channel;
> +};
> +
> +struct led_classdev_mc {
> +	/* led class device */
> +	struct led_classdev led_cdev;
> +	int num_colors;
> +
> +	struct mc_subled *subled_info;
> +};

Would some "unsigned"s make sense here to cut number of corner cases?

Best regards,
									Pavel
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