On Thu, 2020-11-12 at 13:47 -0800, Tushar Sugandhi wrote:Will do. Thanks for the quick response Mimi.
On Sun, 2020-11-01 at 14:26 -0800, Tushar Sugandhi wrote:Sure. Thanks a lot for giving an example wording for us. Will update.
process_buffer_measurement() currently only measures the input buffer.
In case of SeLinux policy measurement, the policy being measured could
be large (several MB). This may result in a large entry in IMA
measurement log.
SELinux is an example of measuring large buffer data. Please rewrite
this patch description (and the other patch descriptions in this patch
set) without using the example to describe its purpose [1].
In this case, you might say,
The original IMA buffer data measurement sizes were small (e.g. boot
command line), but new buffer data measurement use cases are a lot
larger. Just as IMA measures the file data hash, not the file data,
IMA should similarly support measuring the buffer data hash.
I am not sure if you have any concerns about the last two paragraphs.
Introduce a boolean parameter measure_buf_hash to support measuring
hash of a buffer, which would be much smaller, instead of the buffer
itself.
To use the functionality introduced in this patch, the attestation
client and the server changes need to go hand in hand. The
client/kernel would know what data is being measured as-is
(e.g. KEXEC_CMDLINE), and what data has it’s hash measured (e.g. SeLinux
Policy). And the attestation server should verify data/hash accordingly.
Just like the data being measured in other cases, the attestation server
will know what are possible values of the large buffers being measured.
e.g. the possible valid SeLinux policy values that are being pushed to
the client. The attestation server will have to maintain the hash of
those buffer values.
Each patch in the patch set builds upon the previous one. (Think of
it as a story, where each chapter builds upon the previous ones.)
With rare exceptions, should patches reference subsequent patches. [2]
[1] Refer to Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst
[2] Refer to the section "8) Commenting" in
Documentation/process/coding-style.rst
The description about the attestation client and server (the last two
paragraphs) was added for information/clarification purpose only, as per
your feedback on previous iterations. The subsequent patches don’t have
any code pertaining to attestation client/server.
*Question*
Maybe the last two paragraphs are confusing/redundant. Could you please
let me know if I should remove the above two paragraphs altogether?
(starting with “To use the functionality introduced in this patch ...”)
If we decide to keep the paragraphs, I will remove the specific examples
(KEXEC_CMDLINE, SeLinux etc.) as you mentioned elsewhere.
Instead of the above two paragraphs, perhaps explain how measuring the
file data hash differs from measuring the buffer data hash. Keep the
explanation generic, short and simple.
Mimi