Re: [PATCH v5 11/13] leds: mt6370: Add MediaTek MT6370 current sink type LED Indicator support

[Andy Shevchenko]

On Fri, Jul 15, 2022 at 1:29 PM ChiaEn Wu <peterwu.pub@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> From: ChiYuan Huang <cy_huang@xxxxxxxxxxx>
>
> The MediaTek MT6370 is a highly-integrated smart power management IC,
> which includes a single cell Li-Ion/Li-Polymer switching battery
> charger, a USB Type-C & Power Delivery (PD) controller, dual
> Flash LED current sources, a RGB LED driver, a backlight WLED driver,
> a display bias driver and a general LDO for portable devices.
>
> In MediaTek MT6370, there are four channel current-sink RGB LEDs that
> support hardware pattern for constant current, PWM, and breath mode.
> Isink4 channel can also be used as a CHG_VIN power good indicator.

...

> +         This driver can also be built as a module. If so the module

so, the

> +         will be called "leds-mt6370.ko".

No ".ko".

Why did you ignore these comments? Please go and fix _everywhere_ in
your series.
It's basically the rule of thumb, if the reviewer gives a comment
against an occurrence of something, go through entire series and check
if there are other places like commented one and address them all.

...

> + * Author: Alice Chen <alice_chen@xxxxxxxxxxx>

Strange, the commit message doesn't have a corresponding SoB, why?

...

> +#define MT6370_PWM_DUTY                                31
> +#define MT6372_PMW_DUTY                                255

Looks like these are limits by hardware?
Check with the datasheet if (BIT(x) - 1) makes more sense here.

...

> +       switch (led_no) {
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> +               sel_field = F_LED1_DUTY;
> +               break;
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> +               sel_field = F_LED2_DUTY;
> +               break;
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> +               sel_field = F_LED3_DUTY;
> +               break;
> +       default:
> +               sel_field = F_LED4_DUTY;

Missed break;

> +       }

...

> +       switch (led_no) {
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> +               sel_field = F_LED1_FREQ;
> +               break;
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> +               sel_field = F_LED2_FREQ;
> +               break;
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> +               sel_field = F_LED3_FREQ;
> +               break;
> +       default:
> +               sel_field = F_LED4_FREQ;

Ditto.

> +       }

...

> +       switch (led_no) {
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> +       case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> +               *base = MT6370_REG_RGB1_TR + led_no * 3;
> +               break;
> +       default:
> +               *base = MT6370_REG_RGB_CHRIND_TR;

Ditto.
It seems you dropped them for all switch-cases. It's not goot, please
restore them back.

> +       }

...

> +       u8 val[P_MAX_PATTERNS / 2] = {0};

{ } should suffice


> +       /*
> +        * Pattern list
> +        * tr1: byte 0, b'[7: 4]
> +        * tr2: byte 0, b'[3: 0]
> +        * tf1: byte 1, b'[7: 4]
> +        * tf2: byte 1, b'[3: 0]
> +        * ton: byte 2, b'[7: 4]
> +        * toff: byte 2, b'[3: 0]
> +        */
> +       for (i = 0; i < P_MAX_PATTERNS; i++) {
> +               curr = pattern + i;
> +
> +               sel_range = i == P_LED_TOFF ? R_LED_TOFF : R_LED_TRFON;
> +
> +               linear_range_get_selector_within(priv->ranges + sel_range,
> +                                                curr->delta_t, &sel);
> +
> +               val[i / 2] |= sel << (4 * ((i + 1) % 2));
> +       }
> +
> +       memcpy(pattern_val, val, 3);
> +       return 0;
> +}

...

> +out:

out_unlock:

> +       mutex_unlock(&priv->lock);
> +
> +       return ret;

...

> +out:

Ditto. And so on.

> +       mutex_unlock(&priv->lock);
> +
> +       return ret;

...

> +               sub_led = devm_kzalloc(priv->dev,
> +                                      sizeof(*sub_led) * MC_CHANNEL_NUM,
> +                                      GFP_KERNEL);

NIH devm_kcalloc(). Also check if you really need zeroed data.

> +               if (!sub_led)
> +                       return -ENOMEM;

...

> +                       ret = fwnode_property_read_u32(child, "color", &color);
> +                       if (ret) {
> +                               dev_err(priv->dev,
> +                                       "led %d, no color specified\n",
> +                                       led->index);
> +                               return ret;

return dev_err_probe(...) ; ?

Ditto for many places in your entire series.

> +                       }

...

> +       priv = devm_kzalloc(&pdev->dev,
> +                           struct_size(priv, leds, count), GFP_KERNEL);

At least one parameter can be placed on the previous line.

> +       if (!priv)
> +               return -ENOMEM;

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With Best Regards,
Andy Shevchenko