Re: [PATCH] platform/x86: asus-wmi: add support for vivobook fan profiles

[Ilpo Järvinen]

On Tue, 16 Apr 2024, Mohamed Ghanmi wrote:

> On Tue, Apr 16, 2024 at 03:51:03PM +0300, Ilpo Järvinen wrote:
> > On Sun, 14 Apr 2024, Luke D. Jones wrote:
> > 
> > > From: Mohamed Ghanmi <mohamed.ghanmi@xxxxxxxxx>
> > > 
> > > Add support for vivobook fan profiles wmi call on the ASUS VIVOBOOK
> > > to adjust power limits.
> > > 
> > > These fan profiles have a different device id than the ROG series.


> > > and different order.
> > 
> > Fix grammar.
> 
> my grammar is not the greatest so i'm finding it hard to know what is
> the error you're referring to but I think that 'add'
> should become 'adds' ?

That's not what I was referring to, you've a dangling/broken "sentence"
right in front of my reply: 

"and different order."

Please fix that. Perhaps you just want to remove the stop (".") from 
the previous sentence to join the sentences together?

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 i.