Re: [PATCH V2 1/5] dt-bindings: input: Add YAML to Awinic sar sensor.

[Krzysztof Kozlowski]

On 05/06/2024 11:11, wangshuaijie@xxxxxxxxxx wrote:
> From: shuaijie wang <wangshuaijie@xxxxxxxxxx>
> 
> Add the awinic,aw_sar.yaml file to adapt to the awinic sar sensor driver.

Subject: drop final stops. From all your patches.

> 
> Signed-off-by: shuaijie wang <wangshuaijie@xxxxxxxxxx>
> ---

No changelog, so nothing improved?

>  .../bindings/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml         | 125 ++++++++++++++++++

No underscores, but rather awinic,aw96103.yaml

>  1 file changed, 125 insertions(+)
>  create mode 100644 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..2560ef09d3d0
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml
> @@ -0,0 +1,125 @@
> +# SPDX-License-Identifier: (GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause)
> +%YAML 1.2
> +---
> +$id: http://devicetree.org/schemas/input/awinic,aw_sar.yaml#
> +$schema: http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#
> +
> +title: Awinic sar sensor driver family

driver as Linux driver or some other hardware meaning? If first, then
drop and describe hardware.


> +
> +maintainers:
> +  - Shuaijie Wang <wangshuaijie@xxxxxxxxxx>

Missing description. You already got question about meaning of sar and
indeed nothing improved.

> +
> +properties:
> +  compatible:
> +    enum:
> +      - awinic,aw96103
> +      - awinic,aw96105
> +      - awinic,aw96303
> +      - awinic,aw96305
> +      - awinic,aw96308
> +
> +  reg:
> +    maxItems: 1
> +
> +  irq-gpio:
> +    maxItems: 1
> +
> +  awinic,sar-label:

label is a string, not number.

> +    $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/uint32
> +    description:
> +      Set the label of the SAR(Specific Absorption Rate) sensor.
> +      It is set to 0 if one awinic sar chip is used.
> +      If two awinic sar chips are used, awinic,sar-label in the first
> +      awinic-sar should be set to 0 and awinic,sar-label in the second
> +      awinic-sar should be set to 1.

Sorry, no instance indexing. Drop.

> +
> +

No need for two line breaks.

> +  awinic,regulator-power-supply:
> +    description:
> +      Choose if you want to use a regulator to power the chip. Then the
> +      vccX-supply has to be set.
> +
> +  vcc0-supply:
> +    description:
> +      Optional regulator for chip, 1.7V-3.6V.
> +      If two awinic sar chips are used, the first regulator
> +      should set the ID to vcc0-supply and the second regulator
> +      should set the ID to vcc1-supply.
> +
> +  awinic,channel-use-mask:
> +    $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/uint32
> +    description:
> +      The mask of channels used.
> +      Configure according to the specific chip channel used.
> +      Bit[31:0] Each bit represents a channel.
> +      If the customer uses ch0 and ch2, then channel_use_mask=<0x05>
> +      For a 3-channel chip, the maximum value is 0x07;
> +      For a 5-channel chip, the maximum value is 0x1F;
> +      For a 8-channel chip, the maximum value is 0xFF;
> +
> +  awinic,update-fw:
> +    type: boolean
> +    description:
> +      Choose if you want to update the firmware.

Not much improve in explanation or rationale. Why do you want to update
FW every time? Explain this in property description.

I mostly skipped the rest, because it does not look like you addresses
previous feedback.

...
> +
> +required:
> +  - compatible
> +  - reg
> +  - irq-gpio
> +  - awinic,sar-label
> +  - awinic,channel-use-mask
> +
> +unevaluatedProperties: false

Missing some ref, like dai-common or component... or this is supposed to
be additionalProperties: false instead.

> +
> +examples:
> +  - |
> +    #include <dt-bindings/gpio/gpio.h>
> +    #include <dt-bindings/interrupt-controller/irq.h>
> +    i2c {
> +        #address-cells = <1>;
> +        #size-cells = <0>;
> +        awinic-sar@12 {

Node names should be generic. See also an explanation and list of
examples (not exhaustive) in DT specification:
https://devicetree-specification.readthedocs.io/en/latest/chapter2-devicetree-basics.html#generic-names-recommendation


I still have no clue what is sar and there is no description in this
binding.

> +            compatible = "awinic,aw96308";
> +            reg = <0x12>;
> +            irq-gpio = <&tlmm 72 0>;

Use proper defines.

> +            awinic,sar-label = < 0 >;

Do not introduce different coding style. Drop spaces. See DTS coding style.



Best regards,
Krzysztof