Re: [PATCH 1/2] docs: net: Fix text in eth/intel, mlx5 and switchdev docs

[Jakub Kicinski]

On Fri,  8 Nov 2024 13:25:47 -0700 Abhinav Saxena wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> index f355f0166f1b..df4b4c4a15d5 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
>  monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications.  For example, a port moved into a
>  bond will see its upper master change.  If that bond is moved into a bridge,
>  the bond's upper master will change.  And so on.  The driver will track such
> -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by

Are you sure? The first 'in' is for position, the second for topology.
Equivalent to:

 movements to know in what position a port is in the overall topology by
                   ^^                         ^^

We can rephrase to avoid the double in:

  The driver will track such movements to know the position of a port
  within the overall topology by registering for netdevice events and
  acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.

>  registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.
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