Re: [PATCH 1/3] dt-bindings: clock: renesas: Fix description section

[Pavel Machek]

Hi!

> On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 at 09:32, Tommaso Merciai
> <tommaso.merciai.xr@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > Remove not needed "and" into description section.
> >
> > Reported-by: Pavel Machek <pavel@xxxxxxx>
> > Closes: https://lore.kernel.org/cip-dev/Z9P%2F51qOlq2B46FK@xxxxxxxxxx/
> > Signed-off-by: Tommaso Merciai <tommaso.merciai.xr@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> 
> Thanks for your patch!
> 
> > --- a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/clock/renesas,rzv2h-cpg.yaml
> > +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/clock/renesas,rzv2h-cpg.yaml
> > @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ maintainers:
> >  description:
> >    On Renesas RZ/{G3E,V2H(P)} SoCs, the CPG (Clock Pulse Generator) handles
> >    generation and control of clock signals for the IP modules, generation and
> > -  control of resets, and control over booting, low power consumption and power
> > +  control of resets, control over booting, low power consumption and power
> >    supply domains.
> >
> >  properties:
> 
> I think the original is fine.  When emphasizing the structure:
> 
>     The CPG handles:
>       A. generation and control of clock signals for the IP modules,
>       B. generation and control of resets, and
>       C. control over booting, low power consumption and power supply domains.
> 
> i.e. the "and" is part of the typical "A, B, and C" construct?

Well, it is still horid sentence. What about making it into list, as
you did?

Best regards,
								Pavel
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