Re: [PATCH 4/8] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort: fix remaining grammar

From: Aveline Noir

Date: Mon Oct 26 2026 - 11:55:43 EST


Hi SJ and Manuel,

On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 07:44:50 -0700, SJ Park wrote:

> > Yours isn't wrong but I would make it:
> > +this scheme should automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory
> >
> > Choose as you like.

I feel my wording reads a little better here, so I might lean towards
keeping it.

> > My choice :
> > +Below are the descriptions of each parameter.

Agreed. The plural "descriptions" reads better here.

> > I would go for this, but I'm not sure:
> > +Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions have been exceeded.
>
> I have no strong opinion. Aveline, let me know if you have some.

I think "has been exceeded" fits here, since the subject is the
singular "time quota limit". The same applies to cold regions.

Thanks for the reviews :)
Aveline Noir