[PATCH v2 2/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: rewrite complex parts

[Manuel Ebner]

Rewrite complex sentences.

Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@xxxxxxxxxxx>
Suggested-by: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@xxxxxxxxx>
---
Two more minor changes
@ 31
/s/attempts to pages out those/attempts to page out those/
@ 126
+ 'is' to fix grammar

 .../admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst          | 19 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
index 0bab2299ea..033686f410 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
@@ -30,12 +30,13 @@ guests could mitigate this problem.
 How It Works?
 =============
 
-DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that weren't accessed for specific time
-duration and page out.  To avoid it consuming too much CPU for the paging out
-operation, a speed limit can be configured.  Under the speed limit, it pages
-out memory regions that weren't accessed longer time first.  System
-administrators can also configure under what situation this scheme should
-automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks.
+DAMON_RECLAIM identifies memory regions that have not been accessed for a
+specified period and attempts to page out those.  To avoid it consuming
+too much CPU for the paging out operation, a speed limit can be configured.
+Within the configured speed limit, it prioritizes regions that have been
+idle longer for reclamation.  System administrators can also configure under
+what situation this scheme should automatically be activated and deactivated
+with three memory pressure watermarks.
 
 Interface: Module Parameters
 ============================
@@ -125,8 +126,8 @@ quota_reset_interval_ms
 
 The time/size quota charge reset interval in milliseconds.
 
-The charge reset interval for the quota of time (quota_ms) and size
-(quota_sz).  That is, DAMON_RECLAIM does not try reclamation for more than
+The charge reset interval for the quota of time is quota_ms and for the quota of
+size is quota_sz.  That is, DAMON_RECLAIM does not try reclamation for more than
 quota_ms milliseconds or quota_sz bytes within quota_reset_interval_ms
 milliseconds.
 
@@ -137,7 +138,7 @@ quota_mem_pressure_us
 
 Desired level of memory pressure-stall time in microseconds.
 
-While keeping the caps that are set by other quotas, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically
+While respecting the limits imposed by other quotas, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically
 increases and decreases the effective level of the quota aiming this level of
 memory pressure is incurred.  System-wide ``some`` memory PSI in microseconds
 per quota reset interval (``quota_reset_interval_ms``) is collected and
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