Re: [PATCH v2 2/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: rewrite complex parts

[SJ Park]

Hello Manuel,


On Tue, 27 Oct 2026 22:23:46 +0100 Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Rewrite complex sentences.

Any special reason to keep this as a separated one?  I think it is ok to merge
this into the first patch.

> 
> Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebnerli@xxxxxxxxxxx>
> Suggested-by: Aveline Noir <jm5905938@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
> Two more minor changes
> @ 31
> /s/attempts to pages out those/attempts to page out those/
> @ 126
> + 'is' to fix grammar
> 
>  .../admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst          | 19 ++++++++++---------
>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
> index 0bab2299ea..033686f410 100644
> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst
> @@ -30,12 +30,13 @@ guests could mitigate this problem.
>  How It Works?
>  =============
>  
> -DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that weren't accessed for specific time
> -duration and page out.  To avoid it consuming too much CPU for the paging out
> -operation, a speed limit can be configured.  Under the speed limit, it pages
> -out memory regions that weren't accessed longer time first.  System
> -administrators can also configure under what situation this scheme should
> -automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks.
> +DAMON_RECLAIM identifies memory regions that have not been accessed for a
> +specified period and attempts to page out those.  To avoid it consuming
> +too much CPU for the paging out operation, a speed limit can be configured.
> +Within the configured speed limit, it prioritizes regions that have been
> +idle longer for reclamation.  System administrators can also configure under
> +what situation this scheme should automatically be activated and deactivated
> +with three memory pressure watermarks.
>  
>  Interface: Module Parameters
>  ============================
> @@ -125,8 +126,8 @@ quota_reset_interval_ms
>  
>  The time/size quota charge reset interval in milliseconds.
>  
> -The charge reset interval for the quota of time (quota_ms) and size
> -(quota_sz).  That is, DAMON_RECLAIM does not try reclamation for more than
> +The charge reset interval for the quota of time is quota_ms and for the quota of
> +size is quota_sz.  That is, DAMON_RECLAIM does not try reclamation for more than
>  quota_ms milliseconds or quota_sz bytes within quota_reset_interval_ms
>  milliseconds.

I think the original sentence was not that confusing.  Also, this changes the
nuance of the sentence?  What the sentence is saying is
"quota_reset_interval_ms is the charge reset interval for ...".  If this was
really confusing, maybe we can add "quota_reset_interval_ms is " part.

But, I start feeling we might trying too much polishing...?

>  
> @@ -137,7 +138,7 @@ quota_mem_pressure_us
>  
>  Desired level of memory pressure-stall time in microseconds.
>  
> -While keeping the caps that are set by other quotas, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically
> +While respecting the limits imposed by other quotas, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically
>  increases and decreases the effective level of the quota aiming this level of
>  memory pressure is incurred.  System-wide ``some`` memory PSI in microseconds
>  per quota reset interval (``quota_reset_interval_ms``) is collected and

I'm not sure if the original sentence was really difficult to understand.

I'd prefer dropping this change.


Thanks,
SJ

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