Re: [PATCH] Documentation/admin-guide: Embargoed hardware security issues

[Randy Dunlap]

On 8/15/19 3:31 PM, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote:
> On Thu, Aug 15, 2019 at 03:12:34PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
>> On 8/15/19 2:20 PM, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote:
>>>>> +The hardware security team will provide a per incident specific encrypted
>>>> s/per incident specific/incident-specific/
>>> Fixed.  And changed /a/ to /an/
>>
>> eh?  still should be /a per incident/
> 
> The sentence was changed to:
> 	The hardware security team will provide an incident-specific
> 	encrypted...
> 
> is not "an" correct here?

That's good then.  I didn't see the complete sentence.

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~Randy